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Post by softspoken on Mar 30, 2007 11:45:15 GMT -8
Poetry is a form art, so why don't ya'll post some of your completed or incomplete work and people can give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Don't be shy!
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Post by softspoken on Mar 30, 2007 13:22:17 GMT -8
Um.... So I guess I'll start I wrote this one today:
Blindly Searching for Extrication (i'm not yet defs sure for the title, I was always bad at titling)
What are we worth In this constant battle Of what is right and wrong To indulge in the fight That is never ending That is unforgiving That closes our eyes So we are blind Presidents praying to their "God" Hoping to receive an answer that Justifies Their actions of sin Kings and Queens only want What is best for their own blood What is right in this twisted world What is wrong in this never ending Chase For emancipation For peace What have we given What have we gained Just to throw it all away To begin again
umm so don't be assholes, I know it ain't nothing good, but I want to read everyone else's pieces of work so I STARTED THE THREAD AHEM
post away.
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Post by ga on Mar 30, 2007 15:10:09 GMT -8
wrong forum.
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Post by softspoken on Mar 31, 2007 3:08:36 GMT -8
no.. it's not. dude, not at all. the other forum is like BAD poetry this isn't meant for bad poetry yenno? galleries post poetry too
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