0ww0
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Post by 0ww0 on Dec 20, 2006 12:34:14 GMT -8
Okay this is a poem about myself... by myself.
There once was a boy named 0ww0 Instead of having 10 he had 11 toes All the kids at school made fun of him But he knew that one day there lives would be dull and dim However 0ww0 knew that one day he could Join the circus Or chop down trees for wood
But one day 0ww0 used his magic powers to make all the homeless people take showers When 0ww0 was finished and done washing and cleaning all of the bums He discovered his best friend who was a jew had turned himself into pea stue so 0ww0 cried for days adn days untill he sat down in a tree and thats where he stayed.
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Post by ga on Dec 20, 2006 14:27:25 GMT -8
what the f**k that's a nursery rhyme (horrible thoughts excluded) not a poem. you want a poem? this is a (free verse)poem with gentle strokes, the wind sharpens/ change occurs momentarily, within yourself/ the fire burns, to be moved by the elements/ you are your own nature. earth is a reflection/ drifting through time, lonely as it were, and a duty/ to be fufilled, is to find love and to warm the heart/ because you are the earth. nature is a reflection/ ^ that was just freestyle
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Post by ga on Dec 21, 2006 22:42:43 GMT -8
did you seen anything about nihilism in that? no. it was about the elements.
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0ww0
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Post by 0ww0 on Dec 23, 2006 1:17:54 GMT -8
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Post by lolassault on Jan 9, 2007 0:43:57 GMT -8
just as commentary, i think that counts as one of the most anticlimactic exchanges of wit i've borne witness to in the last two years.
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Post by PhoenixFlare500 on Jan 9, 2007 10:22:03 GMT -8
I hope you actually have 11 toes, 'cause it ain't cool jokin' about that.
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Post by Prone on Jan 9, 2007 14:50:09 GMT -8
Did you just double-post, manifest? You told me not to do that.
edit: Manifest, you and your raps are dead I have to ask, did you have too much dye, mainly red? Its like a high-energy drink, to make you go round and spill your rhymes like they ain't got sound
Dissing 0ww0 for what she has done just makes me sick I hate it when you do that, you'd be my worst pick Hey look, its the MTV awards, can't see manifest he just took the short road, his raps are the opposite of best
And when you rap, you can't help but cuss its just the normal life of one who can't take a bus cause he ain't got a care, and his momma don't either well, I'm bout to get out, take care, weezer!
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Post by tyrantisius on Jan 9, 2007 18:25:08 GMT -8
Prone you dumbass, it wasn't a double post. There was originally a reply in between his posts that was, for some reason, deleted.
And stop rapping! Gawd!
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dxlightning
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Post by dxlightning on Jan 9, 2007 19:19:32 GMT -8
Yea seriously prone, you are WAY too white to be rapping. You're worse than DP.
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Post by Chalupa! on Jan 9, 2007 19:38:59 GMT -8
Yea seriously prone, you are WAY too white to be rapping. You're worse than DP. Come on now.... No one is worse than DP!
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Post by softspoken on Feb 6, 2007 21:49:47 GMT -8
I have a lame poem first poem I wrote that has a rhyming scheme that makes PARTIAL sense don't knock it until.. um... whatever, knock it:
You sing it over and over once more, Ain't got no more worries, you know who's the whore (She ain't gotta suck dick, to make it sick) And I've seen so many faces Within this dark oasis You say one thing, mean another, Feeling something but move on, 'cause nothing is forever We hear those songs filled with sorrow and despair, Ear candy for the guilty as we walk the road to nowhere "I don't know where I'm from, just know where I belong" And yet still, I haven't found my song A place to call my own Even as I pick up the phone, It's not me, Or can you not see? There is no piece of sympathy And I want nothing but me Nothing is nowhere, But I'll take you there
Even while my heart, Even while my skin, Feelings, senses - - - all begin to fade away I wonder, how it got to this, as I begin to sway Got on this fresh scene, beginning to gain, But the more I got, the more it fell to pain
We act React But the situations, They're unfixed.
haha okay, I don't know why I put this up here, but I saw the word "poem" and I just had to. okay let the knocking begin!
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Post by porsche944s on Feb 8, 2007 17:54:31 GMT -8
If you want to hear the most beautiful poem ever...
go to a Porsche dealer and ask them to start the motors on all their 911s, Boxsters, and Caymans and listen to them together.
Your pants will require changing due to the excessively orgasmic effect.
Poetry in sound.
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Post by Chalupa! on Feb 8, 2007 21:46:54 GMT -8
I have a lame poem first poem I wrote that has a rhyming scheme that makes PARTIAL sense don't knock it until.. um... whatever, knock it: You sing it over and over once more, Ain't got no more worries, you know who's the whore (She ain't gotta suck dick, to make it sick) And I've seen so many faces Within this dark oasis You say one thing, mean another, Feeling something but move on, 'cause nothing is forever We hear those songs filled with sorrow and despair, Ear candy for the guilty as we walk the road to nowhere "I don't know where I'm from, just know where I belong" And yet still, I haven't found my song A place to call my own Even as I pick up the phone, It's not me, Or can you not see? There is no piece of sympathy And I want nothing but me Nothing is nowhere, But I'll take you there Even while my heart, Even while my skin, Feelings, senses - - - all begin to fade away I wonder, how it got to this, as I begin to sway Got on this fresh scene, beginning to gain, But the more I got, the more it fell to pain We act React But the situations, They're unfixed. haha okay, I don't know why I put this up here, but I saw the word "poem" and I just had to. okay let the knocking begin! I think I'll call it "Greeny". I don't know why, but that name just seems to fit.
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Post by tyrantisius on Feb 9, 2007 0:05:00 GMT -8
Oh wow. Schizo any?
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Post by tehn00b on Mar 5, 2007 16:32:54 GMT -8
"Come on now.... No one is worse than DP! " i dont know... prone to change gives him a pretty good run for his money. id like to place my bets. any takers?
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